BEC商務英語初級師生答疑精選

　　學員mika999: P36 4

　　Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to 1998.Sales of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997，peaked at 25% in 1997，and then droped sharply.Sales of sports games droped by 10% in 1996，remained steady in 1996 and 1997，but increased by 5% in 1998.Sales of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997，and then recovered in 1998.

　　老師回復：Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to 1998.Sales of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997應該用不同的詞來表述GO UP，peaked at 25% in 1997，and then droped sharply.Sales of sports games droped by 10% in 1996，remained steady in 1996 and 1997，but increased by 5% in 1998.Sales of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997，and then recovered in 1998.

　　表達很清楚,非常不錯

　　不足之處是 應該用不同的.上升和下降的詞匯表達

　　一個詞匯用幾遍顯得很羅嗦,建議改正

【BEC商務英語初級師生答疑精選】相關文章：

BEC商務英語初級閱讀技巧09-16

BEC商務英語初級寫作：解釋08-18

精選商務英語BEC初級考試必備句積累12-19

BEC商務英語初級閱讀做題技巧08-18

商務英語BEC初級口語考試短句06-16

2017BEC商務英語考試常見問題答疑11-02

BEC商務英語初級考試閱讀高分技巧08-20

2017年BEC商務英語初級閱讀攻略08-10

商務英語BEC初級模擬練習題10-01

bec商務英語初級考試高分閱讀技巧09-24