托?荚嚜(dú)立寫作預(yù)測及范文(生活類)
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(生活類). Agree or disagree: more and more people are beginning to spend large sums of money on their pets, even though there are better ways to spend this money.
agree:
1 論點(diǎn):陪伴孩子和老人
解釋:家長忙,沒時(shí)間陪孩子老人,寵物可以作為很好的伙伴
例子:城市中很多家庭都會(huì)養(yǎng)寵物,孩子們放學(xué)以后可以和老人一起帶著寵物去逛公園。例如很多家庭都會(huì)養(yǎng)狗狗,他們非常能體會(huì)主人的.感受,當(dāng)孩子回家以后他們都會(huì)很開心的跑過來。甚至泰迪狗會(huì)在主人回來前20min就在門口坐等。孩子和老人會(huì)感覺到很溫暖。
結(jié)論: 寵物能夠驅(qū)散掉父母不能陪伴的孤單
2 論點(diǎn):有利于主人的健康
解釋:市民們?cè)絹碓矫,沒有時(shí)間參加運(yùn)動(dòng),而養(yǎng)寵物可以卻可以改善這種情況。
例子: 養(yǎng)寵物的人都會(huì)有這樣的經(jīng)歷,每天回家都會(huì)帶著狗狗去樓下走走跑跑,在和寵物在一起玩耍的過程中,不知不覺就有一定的運(yùn)動(dòng)量。也有很多文章指出,養(yǎng)寵物能夠讓人們免于受到一些常見疾病的出現(xiàn),如高血壓,心臟病等。和寵物在一起也能夠幫人們樹立一種積極的心態(tài),養(yǎng)寵物培養(yǎng)的愛心也能夠使的主人更容易交到更多的朋友。
3 讓步段
2月27/28日托福獨(dú)立寫作范文:
Under current circumstances, the feeling of solitude prevails among the young and old generation as a consequence of lacking time to stay with them for the middle ages. In this case, some people may insist on the belief that it is necessary to raise a pet to driver away the sense of loneliness. However, I choose to go against the opinion and there are several reasons and examples to support what I believe.
For one thing, the tremendous economic pressure makes it less practical to raise a pet for a common family and there is less time to take good care of the pet. To be more specific, average citizens are constantly on the path to accomplish their professional assignments and the increasing prices of daily commodities and anything else will exert a heavier pressure on them than before. Thus, to deal with their occupational tasks more efficiently, citizens are supposed to bury their heads in their offices, leaving no time to take other things into account. What an ordinary citizen has to engage in their everyday life can reveal the hardship and the deficiency of leisure time. My friend serves as a software engineer, with higher paycheck than other careers as a whole, however, he always turns to me to complain how occupied he is and it inclines to be impossible to do what favors him, like going on a trip or raising a pet. Except for that, the necessity of paying back the house and car loans confine him in the plan of his future career promotion since he dreams to be a painter since his childhood. The reality lashes his dream, necessitating his fully concentration on his current profession. Obviously, the society has thwarted people in many areas.
For another thing, raising pets will pose a potential threat to the physical health of people, especially the younger and older. More specifically, pets that could carry the possible bacterium and virus will infect children, especially infants owing to the less maturity of physical conditions that leads to the less mature immunity system. A happening example may demonstrate my standpoint that epidemic virus called Zika has caused massive damage and panic among the general public and even the local government has issued an urgent policy to alert new couples not to get pregnant. The virus cannot disseminate between people, but, they can spread by the flying mosquitos that will carry virus after biting someone infected with Zika. Nowadays, there is no vaccine and effective way of treating the disease and the patients hit by the virus will show no apparent symptom just a common fever and headache, making it more difficult to judge whether the virus has appeared in some regions. By analogy, pets can be a virus carrier and endanger their hosts and others when their owners hang out with them. Obviously, raising the pets will increase the hardship of curbing the spread of virus once some rampant diseases erupt.
Admittedly, to some extent, raising pets can somehow create some benefits. While walking a pet, people can lead a different life from their normal workday. The increasing physical exercises can help avoid some common diseases that can occur to the middle such as high blood pressure and heart attack. It seems to be possible, however, it cannot be regarded a convincing reason to keep a pet. A growing number of citizens have become aware of the importance of keeping fitness and there will be a number of citizens who try to participate whatever kind of sports like playing basketball or going hiking. Thus, the health issue will be not a problem in the future coincident with constantly strengthened consciousness of keeping fit.
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