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2016高考英語書面表達(dá)講義訓(xùn)練及參考范文
明天就要高考了，今天小編整理了歷屆比較有代表性的高考英語寫作范文給大家參考參考，希望可以幫助同學(xué)們提高自身英語寫作能力，戰(zhàn)勝高考。
2016高考英語書面表達(dá)講義及訓(xùn)練(8)及參考范文：圖表式書面表達(dá)思路與技巧
假如你是李華，請(qǐng)就本校食堂服務(wù)(canteen service)的狀況給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信。內(nèi)容包括：
優(yōu)點(diǎn) 不足 建議 食堂干凈 價(jià)格偏高 盡快解決問題 飯菜可口 種類偏少 服務(wù)態(tài)度好 等候時(shí)間較長(zhǎng) 詞數(shù)：100左右;開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。
Dear Mr. Principal.
I am a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school. _____________________________________________________________________
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Mr. Principal,
I am a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school.
In general, the service is satisfactory. The hall is clean and tidy. The dishes look inviting and taste delicious as well. What's more, the workers there treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy.
However, we feel the price of the meals is a little too high, Besides, we can only have a limited variety of dishes with little change every week. In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. You could understand how precious time is to us students. Therefore, may I suggest something be done to solve the problems so that we can all enjoy our meals at school?
Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
近期，中學(xué)聘請(qǐng)外教之風(fēng)愈演愈烈，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合下表對(duì)其利弊發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。
好處 1. 提高學(xué)校的知名度。
2. 提高學(xué)習(xí)英語的興趣，口語表達(dá)能力增強(qiáng)。
3. 更好地了解外國(guó)文化。 弊端 1. 花費(fèi)高。
2. 一些外國(guó)人難以適應(yīng)我國(guó)的生活方式，甚至擔(dān)心自己的安全。
3. 外國(guó)人不了解中國(guó)學(xué)生的特點(diǎn)。 自己的觀點(diǎn) 一切需要靠自己 注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右 2. 短文應(yīng)包括表中所有要點(diǎn)
3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 4. 開頭及結(jié)尾已給出
Several years ago, when a foreigner appeared in China, many people would gather around and stared at him or her as if they were watching a rare animal.
However, it’s not uncommon to meet some foreigners even in middle schools now. There’s no doubt that schools will be better known. What’s more, it’s good for students to develop interest in English study as well as learn more about foreign cultures. Meanwhile, their oral English will be improved a lot. On the other hand, some foreigners, though well paid, find it difficult to get used to the way of life in a foreign country and they sometimes worry about their safety. The most important thing is that they are not quite familiar with the students. As a result, many students can’t benefit from them.
圖表式書面表達(dá)是常見的一種寫作形式,現(xiàn)筆者結(jié)合下面一則實(shí)例,談?wù)勗鯓訉懞眠@類書面表達(dá)。 根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容,請(qǐng)以"How to Reduce the Present City Population"為題,用英語為雜志社寫一篇短文,闡述你對(duì)這一問題的見解。
建議I 具體措施:A. 晚婚 B. 一對(duì)夫婦,一個(gè)孩子 目的:減少人口自然增長(zhǎng)(人口出生率) 建議II 具體措施:嚴(yán)格控制外地人進(jìn)城務(wù)工經(jīng)商 目的:減少外地人口對(duì)城市的壓力 建議III 具體措施:A. 在郊區(qū),建造生活、商業(yè)、文教、衛(wèi)生、娛樂、休閑生活小區(qū)B. 在城外建造衛(wèi)星城 目的:吸引城市居民到郊區(qū)和衛(wèi)星城工作和生活
注意: 1)詞數(shù):100左右。 2)參考詞匯:嚴(yán)格控制have a tight control, 衛(wèi)星城 satellite town 一、 認(rèn)真審題,準(zhǔn)確把握提示要求。 1. 審體裁。準(zhǔn)確把握體裁是寫好一篇文章關(guān)鍵的一步。體裁的形式直接決定著考生用英語表達(dá)信息的途徑和形式,并影響著書面表述語句的正確性和準(zhǔn)確性。 2. 審人稱。根據(jù)體裁要求,要準(zhǔn)確把握人稱的使用。是用第一、二人稱,還是用第三人稱。 3. 審時(shí)態(tài)。不同的體裁,其動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)的使用也各有不同。一般情況下,故事、日記等體裁常以一般過去時(shí)為主要?jiǎng)釉~時(shí)態(tài);書信、便條、通知等體裁常以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主要?jiǎng)釉~時(shí)態(tài)。 分析以上實(shí)例,應(yīng)以第一人稱的口吻進(jìn)行描寫。從題目要求、表內(nèi)要點(diǎn)以及體裁可知,本文時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主體時(shí)態(tài)。 二、 理清表內(nèi)要點(diǎn),進(jìn)行合理發(fā)揮。 圖表式書面表達(dá)其主要內(nèi)容常被列在表內(nèi)。考生首先必須理清表內(nèi)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),抓住主要信息進(jìn)行描寫�？上劝驯韮�(nèi)所提供的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)用英語列出,盡量使用一些較高層次的詞匯或短語以及所學(xué)過的句法結(jié)構(gòu)(如定語從句、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)等)進(jìn)行描述。例如上述實(shí)例圖表中的內(nèi)容可用英語列出以下幾個(gè)短語或句式: (1) practice a policy of "Late Marriage" and "One Couple, One Child" (2) reduce the birth rate (3) have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs (4) lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population (5) build apartment blocks with shopping centers, schools, hospitals, as well as cinemas and theaters around us or even build satellite towns in the city suburbs or the counties round the cities (6) encourage city citizens to move there to live and work 三、 正確使用過渡性詞語,提高文章的連貫性。 過渡性詞語的使用是語言的連貫性得以實(shí)現(xiàn)的最常用手段。在句子與句子之間,段落與段落之間恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┏猩蠁⑾碌倪^渡性詞語是非常必要的。例如上述實(shí)例,我們可在要點(diǎn)(1)前插入表示時(shí)間順序的過渡詞語 first / firstly, 在要點(diǎn)(3)前插入secondly,在要點(diǎn)(5)前插入finally。在要點(diǎn)(6)前可以插入表示終結(jié)關(guān)系的過渡短語in this way / by this means�，F(xiàn)將中學(xué)課本中應(yīng)掌握的過渡詞語總結(jié)如下: 1. 表示起始關(guān)系的有: first of all, according to, so far, as far as, to begin with, in my opinion等。 2. 表示時(shí)間順序的有: first, then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, since then, immediately, suddenly, soon等。 3. 表示空間順序的有: on the right / left, on one side of, at the top / foot / end of, in the middle of, in front of, at the back of等。 4. 表示并列關(guān)系的有:and, or, also, too, as well as, neither...nor, not only...but also, either...or, not...but等。 5. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的有: but, yet, however, while, on the contrary 等。 6. 表示因果關(guān)系的有: because, since, as, for, thanks to, thus, therefore, as a result (of), one reason is that...another reason is that...等。 7. 表示條件關(guān)系的有: if, unless, as (so) long as, on condition that等。 8. 表示讓步關(guān)系的有: although, though, even if, in spite of, after all, in fact, what (who, when, where, how...) ever 等。 9. 表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的有:what's more, further more, besides, what's worse, to make the matter worse, also, still, on the one hand...on the other hand等。 10. 表示列舉事實(shí)的過渡性詞語有:for example / instance, such as, take...for example, as follows, and so on等。 11. 表示總結(jié)性的有:in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole等。 12. 表示過渡性的插入語有: I think (believe, suppose, imagine, guess...), I'm afraid, you know, as is known to us all, as we all know 等。
根據(jù)以上圖表式書面表達(dá)題寫作思路,上述實(shí)例可整理成文如下: How to Reduce the Present City Population
Our modern city is crowded, and to solve the problem, three proposals are put forward. Most of the people think that we should first practice the policy of "Late marriage" and "One Couple, One Child" in order to reduce the birth rate. Secondly, the city governments must have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs so as to lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population. Finally, more and more people suggest that we should build apartment subdivisions with shopping centers, schools, hospitals, as well as cinemas and theaters around them or even build satellite towns around the cities. In this way, city citizens will be encouraged to move there to live and work. If these three proposals are well carried out, the population will be greatly reduced。
得高考英語寫作者得天下。記住，夢(mèng)想還是要有的，萬一考上了呢。小編順便在這里預(yù)祝將要高考的同學(xué)們考試順利，高考英語六六六。
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