作文是考研復(fù)習(xí)的一大題型,為了讓2017年考生更高效地復(fù)習(xí)考研英語(yǔ)作文,小編搜集整理了作文復(fù)習(xí)的三大高級(jí)句式,希望對(duì)2017年考生有所幫助。
1.高分句式一——短句拉長(zhǎng)
在考研英語(yǔ)作文中,一般短句都可以拉為長(zhǎng)句,而且,從理論上講,一個(gè)句子的長(zhǎng)度可以是無(wú)限的,但是出于實(shí)際情況,大家要學(xué)會(huì)寫(xiě)有限度的長(zhǎng)句。
雖然《考研英語(yǔ)大綱》沒(méi)有明確規(guī)定作文中長(zhǎng)句的長(zhǎng)度和數(shù)量,但是基于考研作文實(shí)戰(zhàn)的需要,考生需要有一種“長(zhǎng)句設(shè)置”意識(shí),即通過(guò)在文中設(shè)置若干個(gè)長(zhǎng)句,向閱卷老師展示考生對(duì)于復(fù)雜語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)的掌握能力,從而征服老師的心,獲得滿(mǎn)意的分?jǐn)?shù)。
寫(xiě)作要領(lǐng)
1.名詞+形容詞,+同位語(yǔ),+定語(yǔ)從句;
2.動(dòng)詞+狀語(yǔ)(時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、目的、方式)。
實(shí)戰(zhàn)舉例
例1:Officials have built highways.
In recent years, responsible, hard-working and warm-hearted officials have built a great number of highways which have brought much convenience to the local citizens.
例1中短句拉長(zhǎng)的步驟:
1.在句首,加上時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)in recent years;
2.在名詞officials前面加上responsible, hard-working, warm-hearted 三個(gè)形容詞修飾它;
3.在名詞highways后面加上定語(yǔ)從句which have brought much convenience to the local citizens。
例2:Factories have discharged gas and liquid.
The newly-built chemical factories have discharged harmful and even poisonous gases and liquids which have had a seriously negative impact on the surrounding environment.
例2中短句拉長(zhǎng)的步驟:
1.在名詞factories前面加上兩個(gè)修飾形容詞newly- built和chemical;
2.在名詞gases and liquids 后面上加上一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句which have had a seriously negative impact on the surrounding environment。
2.高分句式二——插入語(yǔ)
增加句式復(fù)雜性的另外一種方法就是使用插入語(yǔ)。中國(guó)學(xué)生寫(xiě)的英語(yǔ)句子喜歡一通到底,沒(méi)有任何語(yǔ)氣的間歇,像一根筆直的竹竿,因此筆者稱(chēng)之為 “竹竿句”。而英美人士寫(xiě)的句子則不同,他們偏愛(ài)插入語(yǔ),通過(guò)插入語(yǔ)表現(xiàn)出作者語(yǔ)氣的間歇和停頓。有了插入語(yǔ),讀者眼中的句子有一種跌宕起伏的感覺(jué),這種句子像海浪一起忽起忽落,筆者稱(chēng)這種句子為“海浪句”。試比較:
Ancient men made tools out of stone. For instance, they always used flint because it is easier to shape than other kinds of stone. (不使用插入語(yǔ))
Fortunately, however, ancient men made tools of stone, especially flint, because it is easier to shape than other kinds of stone. (使用插入語(yǔ))
由此我們看出:英語(yǔ)句子要寫(xiě)得跌宕起伏才地道。考研的同學(xué)要在語(yǔ)言上下功夫,就必須學(xué)會(huì)寫(xiě)作“海浪句”,從而使自己的作文“波濤洶涌,錯(cuò)落有致”。
寫(xiě)作要領(lǐng)
1. 插入語(yǔ)可以是一個(gè)詞、一個(gè)短語(yǔ),或者一個(gè)句子;
2. 插入語(yǔ)多半用逗號(hào)跟其他成分隔開(kāi);
3. 插入語(yǔ)最好放在主語(yǔ)之后,便于掌握。
實(shí)戰(zhàn)舉例
例1:副詞插入語(yǔ)——frankly, especially, fortunately, indeed, however
坦率地說(shuō),旅游可以促進(jìn)國(guó)家之間的相互了解。
Tourism, frankly, may promote mutual understanding among nations.
例2:短語(yǔ)插入語(yǔ)——generally speaking (總的來(lái)說(shuō)), to tell the truth (老實(shí)說(shuō)), in a sense (從某種意義上說(shuō)),in a word (總而言之), strange to say (說(shuō)來(lái)奇怪)
總而言之,家長(zhǎng)不該無(wú)視電腦游戲?qū)π『⒌母弊饔谩?/p>
In a word, parents should never lose sight of the side-effects of computer games on their children.
例3:短句插入語(yǔ)——I suppose, as I see it, I believe, what is important (重要的是)
在我看來(lái),環(huán)境對(duì)人的性格有深遠(yuǎn)影響。
Environment, as I see it, has a far-reaching influence on one誷 personality.
3.高分句式三——并列結(jié)構(gòu)
使用并列結(jié)構(gòu)寫(xiě)出精彩句式,請(qǐng)大家欣賞以下兩個(gè)精彩的例句:
Studies serve for delight, for ornament, and for ability. (Francis Bacon)
學(xué)習(xí)可以怡情,可以博采,可以長(zhǎng)才。(培根)
...government of the people, by the people and for the people... (Abraham Lincoln)
……民有、民治、民享的政府…… (林肯)
寫(xiě)作要領(lǐng)
用and或者or 連接兩個(gè)詞性相同、意思相近的單詞,就構(gòu)成了并列結(jié)構(gòu)。
比如:give support and assistance to...
...benefit from education and instruction.
...develop and promote economic growth.
實(shí)戰(zhàn)舉例
1.The American girl,dressed in a traditional Chinese costume and ornaments,indicates and symbolizes the multinational communication of cultures and customs. (選自2002年考研作文真題,一句話(huà)包含三處并列結(jié)構(gòu))
2.It goes without saying that the drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China: how to educate and cultivate the young. Let's take a closer look at the drawings. In an ideal condition, the flower blooms. But when moved out of the greenhouse, it perishes under the rain and wind. It is obvious that flower grown in greenhouse can誸 withstand wind and rain. (選自2003年考研作文真題,一個(gè)段落包含四處并列結(jié)構(gòu))
“亮點(diǎn)句式”是考研閱卷老師定檔次、給分?jǐn)?shù)的主要憑據(jù),所以希望同學(xué)們平時(shí)有意識(shí)地多訓(xùn)練自己“亮點(diǎn)句式”的寫(xiě)作,那么在考試中,獲得高分就會(huì)水到渠成了。