иԇкܶҶe`Сиԇec҅
1 Zeλ(Misplaced Modifiers)
ӢZchZͬͬһZھӲͬλӵĺx׃@һcЇW(xu)]ҕ Ҫ`1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.
betterλò(dng)(yng)ھĩ
2 Ӳ(Sentence Fragments)
ڿZУHpɽքZĵľȫԱǕZͲͬӽY(ji)(gu)˼_(d)@Nrl(f)䌑ԺPЩa(b)frl(f)
1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TVradionewspaper and so on.
벿“for example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on”һľӣHһЩB؞~Zܪɾ䡣
Ğ飺There are many ways to know societyfor exampleby TVradioand newspaper.
3 ҴZ(Dangling Modifiers)
^ҴZָĶZcӵ߉P(gun)ϵy磺At the age of tenmy grandfather died. @“at the age of ten” ֻcʮqr]f“ l”ʮqrһmy grandfather ҂@ҴZ_һcȫͲôM
Ğ飺When I was tenmy grandfather died.
1. To do well in collegegood grades are essential.
вʽZ “to do well in college” ߉Z
Ğ飺To do well in college a student needs good grades
4~`(Misuse of Parts of Speech)
“~`”F(xin)飺~(dng)~;~(dng)~;~(dng)~õ
1. None can negative the importance of money.
negative ϵ~`~
Ğ飺None can deny the importance of money.
5ָ(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)
ָҪvǴ~cָ˻P(gun)ϵȺõĴ~һԇ@һ䣺
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
(ҽҪãҪİ)x@һԒxߟo_ДλlY(ji)飬l(dng)҂`Ĵ~ָ_˼һĿȻˡ@ӿɸĞ飺
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
1. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
˷Q~we ͷ~yourselfָһ
Ğ飺We can also know society by serving it ourselves.