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英語(yǔ)寫作怎樣使文章有亮點(diǎn)
從歷年書(shū)面表達(dá)高分文章來(lái)看，每篇文章都有亮點(diǎn)，那么英語(yǔ)寫作怎樣使文章有亮點(diǎn)呢，一起來(lái)看看！
1、使用與人不同的表達(dá)方式，特別是提倡打破漢語(yǔ)句子結(jié)構(gòu)的束縛而重組的句子更受歡迎。
1)唐山曾在二十世紀(jì)八十年代發(fā)生過(guò)一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
分析：大多數(shù)同學(xué)使用了there be結(jié)構(gòu)，這是對(duì)的。但是B句卻摒棄了常見(jiàn)句式。另辟蹊徑而使用了“主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)”結(jié)構(gòu)，且使用了terrible,hit/strike這樣的詞匯，更是難能可貴的。
2)你八月十五日的來(lái)信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多數(shù)人使用的方式)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(與多數(shù)人使用的方式不同,簡(jiǎn)潔）
2.使用一些強(qiáng)勢(shì)句式，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)句的表現(xiàn)力。
3)湯姆救了我妹妹。
A: Tom saved my sister.(一般句式)
B: It was Tom that saved my sister.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句式)
4)我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長(zhǎng)勢(shì)喜人很是高興。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陳述句)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感嘆句)
◆強(qiáng)調(diào)句：可以輕松地將時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、原因、方式等類型的狀語(yǔ)從句轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)閺?qiáng)調(diào)句。
It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter.
It was then that I realized the importance of English.
◆倒裝句：只要句中有介詞短語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ)從句，便可將其提前，變成倒裝句。
Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me.
Only by this means can he escape from the big fire.
◆with引導(dǎo)的伴隨結(jié)構(gòu)：可以將狀語(yǔ)從句或并列句中的其中一個(gè)分句變成with結(jié)構(gòu)。
With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits
He always likes to sleep with the windows open.
◆巧妙地使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：可以將狀語(yǔ)從句或并列的動(dòng)詞簡(jiǎn)化為非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。
Hearing that, the driver’s wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (低級(jí)形式：When he heard that, ……)
◆恰到好處的被動(dòng)句：適合應(yīng)用于較簡(jiǎn)短的句子，這樣顯得語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔生動(dòng)，賓語(yǔ)一般是nothing、anything、everything等不定代詞。
Searched all my pockets, but nothing was found。
◆感嘆句：通常用于開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾活躍文章氣氛，凡是“I feel ……”之類表達(dá)感情的句子皆可如此改造。
How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the math exam.
◆高級(jí)定語(yǔ)從句：若定語(yǔ)從句中的動(dòng)詞帶有介詞，只需將介詞移至先行詞后。
We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before.
◆進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)：有時(shí)會(huì)含有一定情緒，尤其要使用always這樣的富含感情色彩的副詞。
I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus.
◆婉轉(zhuǎn)表達(dá)：需要使用幽默的技巧，主要用于漫畫(huà)型作文題。
I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned the shop after learning that my handbag had been left on the counter.
◆what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句：將動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)轉(zhuǎn)化為此結(jié)構(gòu)。
3、句式多樣,復(fù)雜得體。
在寫作中應(yīng)避免使用相同長(zhǎng)度的相同句型，而應(yīng)注意句式的變化，如長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句與復(fù)合句共用，還可使用簡(jiǎn)化句等；一些較復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)如獨(dú)立主格，分詞結(jié)構(gòu)等也可使用。
下面的表達(dá)中A句簡(jiǎn)單句多，而且多處使用there be結(jié)構(gòu)，顯得單調(diào)、乏味，而B(niǎo)句就有自己的特色(請(qǐng)同學(xué)們自己分析)。
5)這是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有臥室、有洗澡間、有廚房；臥室里有床、沙發(fā)、桌子和椅子等。
A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
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